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No. 7151
Speaking as an artist myself, I'll go ahead and give you a critique. I'll try not to be a douche about it, but it may come off as a bit harsh, its nothing personal.
Ok I can see that you know exactly what you want to draw, and that's great, but the execution is very sloppy. The images are flat and don't really stick out much, your line work could use some improvement and you should really look into some drawing books to help you learn how to shade and how to proportion your characters so they don't look so...off center. The "How to Draw Manga" series of books have been incredibly helpful for me, so look into them when you have a chance. There are also a ton of online tutorials to be found as well.
Other than that, the concepts are cool. Keep working on your drawing and remember there's always room for improvement.
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