>>6987
Behold, you might actually spoil the small bit of plot that is involved in your scribbles. Don't worry, that definitely won't taint the experience - quite the contrary, it would be intereting how you destroy each possible punchline. Meta-humor.

comic 3

>>7057 My main point of advice would be this; If you want to take this comic further than just sketchbook doodles, you're going to have to neaten up the whole thing. If you can scan the comics, then surely you can make a simple text box so it's easier to read? The style is kinda cute, but I would suggest taking your time with each drawing and practising on separate paper, because the art isn't very consistent.

>>7062 And, this may sound cheap, but if your struggling for jokes, copy others. Comedians have altered other peoples jokes for decades, and it doesn't seem like your building a fully fleshed story here. A quick 3 panel joke is better than 6 panels of mediocre banter. Sorry if I sounded harsh in anyway, but you have to be to some extent if you're being critical.

>>7063>>7062
lol i do draw them out rough first, then i make them neat, the comic gets better, it just i don't know how to use my scanner more, but if you want i'll put what is said on the pannels in the box.
lol i do that anyways keep watching and there might be funny ones in there

comic number 4 ppl's

>>7153
Wow you're bad. If they'd at least be funny.

>>7160
give it time k?

comic five

1st comic, okay this is a joke taken from a old radio show called the goon show.

2nd comic, how many times has this happened to you?

comic 6

first pannel, just a joke on how cartoons work

sencond pannel just a very silly joke

omg sorry i forgot about this site here is yesterday's comic

first pannel, wasn't feeling well so i made this

second pannel, based on the guy who tried to captrue that big spider on his roof

please stop making these. There's clearly no effort in the artwork, the jokes aren't funny, and it's just a bad comic.

...I hate to say it and be so negative, but he's right. I can't find any humor in any of these.

>>7384 They aren't dying on the floor laughing but they do make me smile. But I will be honest quality of the comic (the drawings are nice but lined paper... really?) and the content needs some work. Don't stop though, that won't improve a damn thing.

I think that these comics are, at least a little funny, and I like the way they are drawn, because these look so cute.

right here i am fuck the troll those two comment are the best so here are some more comics!

christmas time! late but cool

more comics, okay first one is fly vs furry who wins?

2nd one is you ever wonder why you sunddly smell fag smoke? well this is why ghost smoking

the lastest one

yeah the first one is based on pac man
the 2nd one is something we all want natnal sleep day

>>7674 >< shit thought i'd left it out sorry comic 9

>>6686

it's not trolling. trolling is a fucking art form and let me tell you, 95% of "trolls" are just people that happen to piss other people off.

anyways, this is everything he said. i really don't want to be mean or anything, but it's pretty terrible. i cannot understand your grammar. at all. not to mention there's no logical or dialogue progression in your strips, it's like you're just writing stuff down and drawing words and saying "THIS IS A STRIP." it reminds me of the comics i drew in elementary school, except imo those were better and less confusing than these.

there is literally all the room for improvement in the world since this is pretty much the worst.
also seriously get a scanner. you can probably find one at a garage sale for like $10.

Yeah... this is pretty retarded.

>>7684 10$ ?.......i'm rich! $_$!

>>7684
>it's not trolling. trolling is a fucking art form

Bahahahaahahaha. You're an idiot.

Also, old music guy, your comics are horrible and not the least bit funny. Stop making them. They are complete shit.

No trolling here, I'm just telling the truth,

no. keep making them. i still enjoy them.

i'm undecied, i don't know weather to post them or what so fuck it

you can find them on sofurry.com, no need to log in or sign up as there clean, click on the bar type in furry, ghost, nonegay/none gay, funny and there'll be there if not wait until thursday and there'll be a new one on there

>>7741 i like these too. dont stop making them now, keep posting.

fine here

see? there getting better! (altho you posted these on sofurry) make some new ones. these are really good.

>>7898 i have a whole load you've missed the last two but only cus ppl said stop, plus more easier on sf, at least then they have to sign up to comment on stuff

comic 12

comic 13

lastest comic 14

comic 15
new person comes

page 16

please tell this guy is a troll

>>8229 >=( not a troll now fuck off

>NO TROLLS! or speam
Aww man, and you know how much I love Speam.

>>7727
Nice samefagging, oldmusicguy.
I don't even get what's going on in half of these. You can't say I didn't try, I read through all of them - hell, if it takes you to draw these over and over again to improve then so be it.

OP, are you twelve?

Doubt it. My bet is on 10.

>>8286 lol well though, this is the only treed that has the rules, if we didn't have rules where would we be? that's right france
>>8294 ugh go away you troll, if you read the other posts, you will see sofurry, its clean so you can view them and what's going on is on there, just i don't like to add so much text on here.
>>8320
>>8322
who? me or the guy who posted 8294?

>>8328
couldn't resist

>>8333
now this is okay for two reasons.
1, you haven't put on a random picture with words under it.
2, i have no idea of the picture, is it a show or a film and is there any p**n of it?

comic 17

>>8340

>>8340
Their names are Scanty and Kneesocks from the anime, "Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt"

>>8340
Look on Gelbooru, you'll find a lot on these two.

Ther art needs work it is hard to read and poorly orignized plus i don't find them funny

>>8344
>>8345
cool, i shall look them up on the day that it snows in the deseret

>>8352
is it? well, go to sofurry.com and you can see bigger hd pictures of them, no need to log in there clean so there'll show.
yeah, some of the artwork is lazy, i think its cus i've rushed, or i need to be more careful when scanning them in, but they do get better, trust me.